Nowadays a large amount of advertising aiming at children should be banned because of the negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that the advertisement industry is experiencing an ever-increasing grown ever since an advertisement aimed at children. Some people, mostly parents, believe that this has detrimental effects on child development and should be prohibited. From my perspective, I disagree entirely with this view for several reasons.
The first argument is given to supper my opinion is that the advertising industry is getting more creative, which means the ads children are receiving are more subtle and less frustrating than before. In fact, those ads are now in the form of short movies with moral messages incorporated within them. By watching some of these ads, children can pick up moral lessons, which is suitable for their ethical development. Combining with the right parenting, the children are enabled to develop positively.
Another rationale behind my belief is that the advertisements can encourage children to be creative and imaginative in the future as children are exposed to multiple life situations. This means that those who turn out to work in the marketing field will benefit from these experiences. In other words, that kind of commercial promotion is always about fantasy worlds and settings, which helps to boost the child’s creativity. As a result, children will be able to become more successful when it comes to choosing a career that relates to being innovative.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that the development of advertising should not be deterred because of the benefits it can bring to children’s growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, no doubt, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39024390244 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06841644121 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630081300813 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0465555451 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184303553047 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630927266384 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557317323051 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123091990197 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465749358583 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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