Nowadays, a lot of people change the way of smoking: from conventional cigarettes to electronic ones.
Discuss advantages and disadvantages of this statement.
In the technologically developing society nowadays, most of the daily belongings developed in an electronic way such as the dish washing machines, electronic doors. The cigarettes could be not an exception when lots of people change the way of smoking into electronic ones. From my personal perspectives, smoking behaviour could not take advantage for the smokers and surroundings, I would like to elaborate on pros and cons in details with the below explaination-essay.
From the first side of the notion, most of the smokers change their smoking routine into electronic cigarettes because it has a good smell and a bunch of flavours. Besides, the design of electronic cigarettes is luxurious and if they are not a professionals in this way they cannot recognise that. Therefore, electronic cigarettes look like decorating toys in order to mark their social status. For example, some teenagers tend to choose the electronic cigarettes for their entertainment because of the learning pressure. The reason is that electronic cigarettes have luxurious design and the percentage of addiction is lower than conventional cigarettes, which helps smokers to avoid relative deseases.
On the other hand, smoking has a strong- negative effect to harm smoker’s lungs. Most people think that electronic cigarettes have a lower accident rate than original ones. But, there are some studies about the harm of both types that being proved the reasons for the death of over 50% due to cigarettes. Smoking has caused a plethora of separation apart from families. If teenagers continue to use electronic cigarettes disorderly, it will implicate everyone around them. Some doctors said that not only smoking users have cancers, but also people who smell the cigarette smoke passively might be affected.
To sum up, the changing from the conventional cigarettes to electronic ones can be the way to help decrease the number of deaths from smoking. However, that certain changing is not the best way when avoiding cigarettes is the most suitable solution to protect our green environment and create a better society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an electronic way" with adverb for "electronic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... most of the daily belongings developed in an electronic way such as the dish washing machines, elec...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a professional' or simply 'professionals'?
Suggestion: a professional; professionals
...rettes is luxurious and if they are not a professionals in this way they cannot recognise that....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, apart from, for example, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33633633634 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97696822578 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5393623371 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0625 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378023159435 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12148468138 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080059076493 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232841109946 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354004035686 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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