Social and modern trends are difficult to follow these days and it’s widely believed that they primarily exist just to make the living more colorful, especially online. Some people believe that we shouldn’t follow them and that we should live in what we are having and feel comfortable. To what extent do you agree with these statements?
These days, many more trends are created to make online environment more creative and colorful. Some people believe that the creation of trends on social networks is to help people entertain themselves online and people should feel comfortable with what they own. In my point of view, I partially agree with this statement.
On the one hand, The trend is known through celebrities, they use the trend to advertise the dance of the song, the movie that they are acting in or coming out and up it on the internet to create a wave of fans dancing, singing along. For instance, lots of singers all around the world use this way to bring their production to audiences. Thus, being famous and making an impact on social media are the real reasons that encourage people to keep making trends.
On the other hand, the emergence of trends makes people spend more time creating video clips and surfing the web. This is a waste when people can take advantage of their time to study and work. Moreover, the majority of successful people, instead of spending time online, they spend learning and accumulating knowledge. Therefore, people need to be satisfied with their real life and need to increase their quality by spending time learning and enjoying more.
In conclusion, people should pay more attention to their real life and decrease the amount of time that they spend on social platforms and creating trends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8625 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40369723898 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4638172362 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.090909091 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184107034858 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731865244976 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686503354601 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124020485545 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694297909586 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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