Nowadays many adults have full-time jobs and the proportion of their lives spent on work is very high. Some of them are under high stress and ignore the other parts of life. What are causes and effects?
Today a various of citizens have full-time occupation and the proportion of their lives spent on work is very high, some of them are under high pressure and forgot the other part of life. The following essay will analyse the main reason of this epidemic and then discuss the possible effect of the problem.
From my point of view, the foremost cause of this phenomenon are high required of each individual and the appearence of automatic robots. First of all, not only do the adults want to provide quality production for the adolesence, increasing their immune systerm, but also they hope that their well-education can be learn by their teenager which improve significantly the academic knowledge or valuable information to contribute their abilities for the nation development. Furthermore, in the international world and with the appearence of new innovation that numerous employees have been replaced by modern technology, so citizens have to do more hard-working to rely their family. To illustrate, more than 10 percent of the adults population in europian countries have become unemployment and homeless because of their bad behave.
The possible effect of this problem include harmful affection for their health and lacking the time for carry their children. working under the stress during the long period will lead demerits influence for their older life such as depression. Morover, the interaction with their children will be wided which call different generation and have terrible influence for the young. To illustrate, there was a survey by Robbin Charten, the famous scientist and professor which was about the success of postgraduate in London who their parent is civil-worker. The statistic showed that nearly everyone has tolk a plenty of mistake and trouble in their career.
To conclude, this phenomenon is a huge problem that affect a lot of people nowaday. It is mainly cause by high required and the appearence of automatic robots and results in health problem and lacking the time for carry their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, well, as to, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22324159021 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79540479814 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584097859327 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3419940717 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.384615385 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1538461538 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319685485194 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107971858012 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136596285993 0.0667982634062 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211965869777 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136752169927 0.056905535591 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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