Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people think that manufacturers and clerker have the responsibility to decrease the amount of packaging of goods, but on other aspect many human belive that citizen should avoid using an abundance of packaging to buy foods. In my opinion, both views have benefits and drawbacks with each situation and each person. The following essay will analyse these statemant in detail.
On the one hand, manufacturers and supermarkets can control the number of people use packaging everday then they will the change to appropriate and effective. This things are very helpful for the enviroment, atmosphere and human's life. Furthermore, the quality of each goods will be better, its can provide in long times without bad influence like nylon package. For instance, using nylon package for the long times may have some terrible influence to foods because it have a lot of bad bacteria. On the nagative aspect, because the packaging are very popular and convinience, when supermarkets ruduce the amount of packaging of goods the diversity of food will be worse than before.
On ther other hand, when customers avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging will make for themselves a good habit. citizens will have more awareness to do not use nylon package, following that our life will better. Moreover, each customers change is much easier than the change of manufacturers and supermarkets. For example, each person bring cart when go to supermarker are reduce a lot of packaging. In addition, this trend will get a bit of inconvinient when do not use nylon package because of its convinient, but each human need to have their own awareness to reduce the amount of packaging.
To conclude, manufacturers changing or customers changing are have their own advantages and drawback appropriate with each person, so people need to have bright choice and have own awareness for a better future and better life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7796870493 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503205128205 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.650798347 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.285714286 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338282158469 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116566112626 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101597843594 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215727688567 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749015863112 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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