Nowadays, many animal species are becoming extinct. Some people
believe that countries and individuals must solve this problem, others believe
that humans beings are more important. Discuss both views and give your
own opinion.
It is true that a variety of animal species are on the verge of extinction. While a number of people believe that human welfare should be the priority of government and the international community, I would argue that people should take action immediately to stop the disappearance of many creatures around the world.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that governments are tensely confronting many problems seriously affecting the human being. Firstly, climate changes and environmental pollution caused a lot of serious consequences. Some of these are the polluted atmosphere and water source, the degradation of soil, drought and constant global warming. Secondly, the world is solving the problems created by themselves such as poverty, the increasing gap between the rich and the poor, the wars and conflicts between nations and terrorism. As the resources of nations and individuals are undoubtedly limited, it is impossible to tackle all the problems at the same time.
On the other hand, while I accept there are a lot of reasons need to be solved to fulfill a better life for human being, the measures for the protection of endangered species should be undertaken in parallel. One reason is that many animal species play as a crucial part in food circulation. Their loss may cause the imbalance of the ecosystem in which the human are a part. Furthermore, the potential extinction of those species is brought by the negative impacts of people on nature. For instance, the deforestation caused by the industrialization and urbanization deprived the inhabitants as well as the food sources of many creatures. Human being needs to protect endangered animals as a way to take their responsibility.
In conclusion, although both views have their point, it seems to me that the extinction problems of animal species should be considered as vital as human being.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... be considered as vital as human being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16776315789 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05325360893 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536184210526 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4995877122 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.214285714 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250603205248 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790487485387 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549261625838 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150068100763 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050834439073 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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