Nowadays many big cities become overcrowded. Why is it happening, in your opinion? What measures could be taken to prevent it?
In the era of industrialization, people are moving from rural to urban and that's why it become populous. There are several reasons for this problem. In this essay, I will consider pros and cons about the causes of overcrowded and possible solution.
Firstly, most of the industries are located in the city area. As a result people migrate to the city area from numerous reasons such as jobs, businesses or any kind of daily works. For example Dhaka is the capital of Bangladesh and most of the jobs and businesses are capital base. Therefore, huge number of citizen live in Dhaka city for jobs or businesses purpose and their families also live in Dhaka city. Due to this reasons Dhaka is a overcrowded city and noisy city in Bangladesh. since everyone knows that highly paid jobs and more opportunities for business plays an important role in improving standard of living of people.
Secondly, every facilities in the small countries are city or capital base. Renowned university, medical and other essential department are situated in the city area which is the another cause of overcrowded. For instance, Chennai is a one of the biggest city in India. Christian Medical College (CMC) is a remarkable hospital in the world which is located in Chennai. Everyday thousand of patient come for the treatment in this hospital and city has become crowded.
As it is a terrible problem in the some cities, it is important to take some steps to decline this problem. Specially every country's government need to take some decisions to solve this problem as well as industrialist. It is important to decentralize the all big institutes in all over the country and take to steps to equally develop the rural side as well urban.
In conclusion, since it is a big problem, government and other concern authority should take some fruitful steps as soon as possible. Otherwise, people will face many problems in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94117647059 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77134922037 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510835913313 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1223727605 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57894736842 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102866516464 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344888988475 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310877700139 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551616793352 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027306265283 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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