Nowadays in many countries women have full time jobs.Therefore, it is logical to share household tasks evenly between men and women.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Today by industrialization societies, women in some countries to make both ends meet have to work shoulder to shoulder with their spouse as a breadwinner. Therefore, chores should be disseminated between man and woman equally. I go along with this matter up to a certain point, which will be discussed succinctly.
To begin with, life expenditures has soared and men single-handed could not support their family. As a result of which, women should have full-time vocation beside their man to fulfill preliminary requisite of their life, namely cost of commodities, fee of their children education as well as health-related issues. Moreover, sometimes for mitigating stress, it is needed that women spend part of their time in working milieu, whereupon they become fitter and less stressed; additionally, could make quality time with their immediate family. Finally, it might seem that working is an integral part of women’s life in some countries.
On the other hand, by employing women out of house they miss some part of household duties, in which case men should come forward to aid them. Thus, in this status que, it might be said that should they schedule their household chores, it will lead to a parity between them. In addition, they could superbly get on in making a work/life balance, wherein it would bring about a major breakthrough in their mutual life.
To recapitulate briefly, in many countries women are taken up as a workforce, with a result of that they could not do some household deeds. With a good coping, household chores could be shared evenly between spouses.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 378, Rule ID: MAJOR_BREAKTHROUGH[1]
Message: Use simply 'breakthrough'.
Suggestion: breakthrough
...balance, wherein it would bring about a major breakthrough in their mutual life. To recapitulat...
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Line 7, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... household chores could be shared evenly between spouses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, finally, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1106870229 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85404575661 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591603053435 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3551674821 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.583333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223795446768 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889603707728 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050703943547 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152214431491 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604135720798 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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