Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centers provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The number of whole - working –parents’s families is increasing rapidly these days . While some of these parents belive family members such as grandparents could look after their children, others claim that childcare systems are the best choice for this matter. In this essay, both sides of the argument will be analyzed before a conclusion is reached.
On the one hand, children could be received stable upbringing in pre-primary schools for some reasons. First, childen are taught by baby-sitters who cumulated knowledge in university and possessed standard educational degrees before they become teachers. Moreover, children might not be timorous when they join higher classes since they had opportunity to access lower – lever educational enviroment before. Although the fact that childcare centers frenquently merly nuture children’s intelligent, it is difficult for them to provide sense of mercy care like immediate family. In the otherwords, children would feel family’s affection from older family members, which fullfil lack of parential care.
On the other hand, grandparents would bring children up when parents’s children are in office. Elderly underwent children- nuture stage many years ago so as to gain adequate babysitting skills. This reminds me of unforgetable story of my friend, Jone Clak. One day, her son had a high fever in middle night. As near hopitals were distroyed by storm last week , my friend called kindergarteners to look for help. Unfortunately, all of these teachers don’t able to give any method for this disease. Then, she called her mother. Thanks to her mother direction, Jone’s son temperature downed. Besides, grandprents love their children deeply so they care these kids devotedly by their heart and affection without service fee like childcare organirations.
In conclusion, it seems that the best solution to the problem is father or mother takes care of their kids. However, if this proves to be difficult to achieve, then I will give more weight to the ideal that family members like grandparents look after.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48297213622 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9747089685 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674922600619 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9979392766 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2105263158 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283037378565 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738874159521 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750495355994 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180012565194 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598363692377 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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