Nowadays many people aim to create a balance between their work and other aspects of their life. However, only a few achieve it. What are the problems in doing this and what solutions can you suggest?
In contemporary society, a great number of people strive to create work-life balance. However, only a minority of them are able to accomplish this. The following paper will be looking at the issues of this trend as well as suggesting some possible solutions to these problems.
Several problems can be anticipated when people lose their work-life balance. First, the lack of work-life balance can seriously affect people’s relationships. Since numerous people are drawn towards their work to earn money for their living, their relationships will gradually vanish because of the shortage of attention and care. Additionally, the fact that the balance between work and personal life disappears may lead to health-related problems. This is because in order to achieve their final goals, a lot of people are willing to exert most of their time and effort to work. Consequently, excessive working can cause medical problems as well as diseases such as myopia, spinal diseases, depression and insomnia.
There are some note-worthy suggestions that can be taken to eradicate the abovementioned problems. The first solution is that people should allocate their time logically by making a proper schedule to divide time for their work and personal use equally. As a result, they can have more time spent with their loved ones so that they can improve their mental life. Moreover, employees can actively engage in recreational activities such as playing sports. This solution can help release negative emotions and stress gained from the workplace. As a result, these employees can become more productive, which then can result in an increase in company’s productivity.
Taking everything into consideration, this reinforces my perspective that work-life balance results in some detrimental effects to people’s relationships and health. However, allocating time logically and actively engaging in recreational activities can be taken into action in order to mitigate the consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, apart from, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44444444444 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04073901379 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576388888889 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8088256736 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.533333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261854405844 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850075304617 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862215574863 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180545807245 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983121765488 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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