In today’s contemporary life, a vast majority of people tend to be self-employed, rather than become an employee for an organization and some experts claim that this can have harmful impacts on society or person. I will elaborate on the reasons which increase the people motivation to work for themselves and the influences of this on the person.
To begin with, it should be noted that the development rate of technology has faced a considerable proliferation since the invention of the internet. So in modern days, various social platforms and a large group of references about different subjects are accessible for all the people. As a result, individuals do not need to company’s specific data to raise their knowledge, and using cutting-edge technologies is sufficient for them. Also, the types of the occupation have been changed dramatically. For example, between the industrial revolution and the 21st century, there was a huge demand for labor workers to work with mechanical equipment in different sites, so working independently is not possible; but now works related to technologies only need a laptop, consequently starting a self-employed job is much easier than past.
However, there are lots of controversial debates about the effects of self-employment. Some researchers assert that being self-employed can be the cause of several psychological problems, such as depression, since it reduces social activities. In addition, the risk of being bankrupt increases for the person who works for his/herself because many of the people who want to start their business do not have enough money, so they get loans and grants. As a result, if they cannot make a remarkable progression and earn enough money, they would not afford to pay back the loans to the bank.
Having manifested the aforementioned subjects and examples, due to the technology development, the number of people who want to begin their business is grown. This can have some disadvantages that should be considered adequately.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.284375 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18513239275 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590625 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.211667767 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.076923077 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318082936829 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992472599181 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837786280523 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186317315559 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046787874648 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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