Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.Why might this be the case?What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Submitted by manvee on Mon, 05/20/2019 - 13:51

Working for a company or dependency to the institution is sometimes rejected today, while people may select to be an entrepreneur or be their own boss. This essay will assert some reason behind this impulse as well as drawbacks.

Undoubtedly, people reject the institutional service when they do not get any job satisfaction or feel pressure to fulfill the target-oriented goal of the company. In addition, heavy workload also impedes their work-life balance. Consequently, things are always different for women, such as some company have not any maternity leave. For instance, one recent survey shows that working an independent environment make people motivated towards the work. In this way, people tend to leave the institutional affiliation and opt to be self-employed.

However, as being self-employed has some inconvenience, one may have a scare to accept the jeopardy to work on one's own. Sometimes, it has no perks or incentives, which makes people financially insolvent. Moreover, here also have the possibility that profit turns into an attenuation. For example, one of my friends leaves his profession for the expectancy of being self-employed and to become a millionaire. After some days he loses his capital and became frustrated. Hence, it is always not a better option, which may turn into an unsuccessful person in life.

In conclusion, though the trend is going to be self-employed today, which may have some cause relate to productivity and motivation, as well as it has some demerits. Furthermore, if people have no certain pressure or strict rules regulation, the output will probably double. However, the flexible working environment may cause harm to the profession.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34701492537 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17975914708 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60447761194 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3418628677 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5625 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9375 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288307832199 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913802690597 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10008335462 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190092903833 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043335607348 0.056905535591 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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