Nowadays many people choose ready made food and refuse to cook at home. why do you think it happens. what are the advantage and disadvantages of such a choice.
Food is the fundamental need of human being. Presently, masses have tendency to eat food from restaurant and eatery shops instead of preparing food at home. Here I would like to account it's reasons along with it's pros and cons.
Manifold reasons are there behind this phenomenon. First and foremost, hectic schedule of people encourage eating outside. To illustrate, people who are working full time job have no time for making traditional food as it requires time and energy. Full time job make people tired and less energetic. Therefore, they prefer to eat food from outlets. Moreover, advertisements also stimulate people for visiting eatery shops. To be specific, through adverts people get to know about the price and discounts in mouth watering food.Thus, wide range adverts related to multi cuisine allure people for eating outside.
Numerous benefits can be mentioned .initially, buying food from outside provide time saving opportunity. To demonstrate, the process of making domestic food is time consuming and after cooking it is necessary to clean the kitchen. Thus, people can not only save precious time but also keep themselves stress free. What is more, people can also satisfied there taste of food because they get bored of eating same food on daily basis .on the other side, opposite wind is also there.
To begin with, firstly, the standard of health declined dramatically. For example, unhygienic food of restaurants make people unhealthy as it is more spicy and oily compare to home made food. Furthermore, traditional food are at the back seat. Home made food will be no longer of that importance.Thence, the trend of eating fast food not only detrimental for health but also decrease the value of making traditional food.
To recapitulate, Undeniably, there are some benefits of eating food outside. However, still I believe that it's negatives outweigh it's positives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, thus, for example, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26557377049 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73192872539 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586885245902 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3583901915 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169901131889 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548358201535 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429989785326 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971624517777 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446649885402 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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