In the contemporary world, excessive work is being done by the people day and night. Couple of factors are responsible for this trend including materialistic thinking and inflation; however appropriate steps can be taken by the employers to restrain the workers to doso.
The foremost cause behind the ideology of relentless oil is, masses want to purchase each and every luxury on the globe such as exclusive
cars, outfits technological gadgets, and this is certainly possible through earning considerable amount of currency. Consequently, the individuals have been working for hours, or prefer to do over time jobs overlooking their health. Apart from this, inflation, nowdays, is touching the sky. Owing to this, many of the people are striving to get basic amenities ranging from food, education to shelter. Thus, it seems indispensable on their part to work extremely hard.
However, employees can ameliorate the current situation by fixing the job duration despite providing flexibility in this regard. In addition, stipends of employees must be increased in accordance with their potential so that they do not need to devote extra time to work. Eventually, workers would switch their mentality towards work since they will get desirable income even on working for less span of time. Moreover, seminars and lectures can be arranged by companies' owners to cast awareness among men and women about health hazards caused by working round the clock, If body does not allow.To illustrate,Realince communications a famous multinational organisation recently organised a lecture on ill effects of overworking through which certain employees have changed methodology of working.
In conclusion, although some people work 24 hours to earn livelihood and do not take care of well- being, appropriate steps in terms of rise in wages and inspiring talks can mitigate the concern.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, well, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43344709898 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99568506254 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686006825939 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.5169083032 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.666666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198969678523 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692489411471 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.023639231043 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948438965553 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412012051 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.