Nowadays media should include more good news in their publications. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Due to rapid advancement in the media, TV and the press who transform the way of primary sources to disseminate the news. However, a school of thought consider that it is mandatory and responsibility of media should reporting more better report because these news are assist regions to reduce pessimistic views, helpful for citizens, declining in crime rates and so on. Moreover, I strongly accord with this perception.
To begin with, the are multifarious factors to support this prospective and an initial is that hearing of bed news have detrimental impacts on the individuals specially teenagers. Reports of war, for example, can create pessimistic views from their surrounding environment. According to this, these reports are responsible to develop dramatically feelings of negativity among adults related their futures. In contrast, good news which telecasts by the television broadcast can helpful for youngsters to full fill positive thinking inside them regarding their careers. Moving further, if media can publish only those reports which in the favour of citizens than a drastic fall can be observe in the amount of pessimistic thoughts.
Furthermore, the another major concerning area is that today a vast number of news belonging to decrease in the economy growth, rising in an unemployment, emerging crime rates, expensive, inflation and etcetera is shown by press or media. Additionally, these reports can not only build up tension level between masses but also related to lots of perilous mental ailments. For instance, a survey conducted by media reported that nowadays 73% people are enduring from disease related to their mind such as migraine, blood pressure, tumour and many more. Even though, news linked to unemployment published by media is responsible reason for the gradual incline in the proportion of jobless people lead to sent them in the criminal world to earn more bread and butter. In other words, if TV broadcast can show the reports attached with the tips how to set up small business and others are providing aid young people to start their own businesses. Last but not least, these kinds of news assist press to reduce rapidly percentage of crime into the globe.
In conclusion, although, silver screen, media as well as press are playing essential role in the development of world but if media will start neglecting their duties than it omitting bed effects on the worldwide. Due to these, it is crucial for media should include huge numbers of goods news in their publications for the betterment of nations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...esponsibility of media should reporting more better report because these news are assist re...
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Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...ld reporting more better report because these news are assist regions to reduce pessimisti...
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Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...th this perception. To begin with, the are multifarious factors to support this pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2152.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22330097087 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78549848159 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594660194175 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.2456636957 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8125 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211532142792 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713256333244 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520089588356 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137124549495 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025924296856 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.