Nowadays more and more older people compete with younger people for the same jobs. What can be the reason for this? What would you as a solution?
it is irrefutable to say that, in the current scenario, human beings lifestyle has undergone a drastic transformation over a past few decades. While, it is believed by a large proportion of people that every individuals is accountable for their own better living others hold opposing view by saying that officials ought to shoulder this responsibilities. this essay analysis both sides of arguments and then I will present my own perspective on this matter.
One convincing reason why individuals themselves pay attention for leading healthy lifestyle is that it allows them to remain healthy,avoid different illness like heart diseases and diabetes and enjoy increases longevity which can only be done by taking balanced diet at home and doing physical workouts. As a result, living healthy enables individuals to be more active in the society and at work because they are likely to feel energies and refresh throughout the day. Consequently, they can focus on their social and professional efforts which would further increase their social and work status. Therefore, it seems logical that people should take this notion personally in order to having physical wellbeing.
Despite the above considerations, the role of government in keeping the health of people cannot be overlooked. this is because authorities can spread awareness through the educational system and media, obliging their citizens to bring necessary positive changes in their way of life. Apart from this, it is by government which can ban all edible products, such as fast food that might put deleterious impact on the health of people. Thereby deteriorating their lifestyle. In other words, for instance banning the sale of junk food and sugary products containing preservatives in the premises of education institute and office would encourage people to eat only healthy food.
In conclusion, although, government can do a lot for improving the way of living of people by implementing stringent laws against the sale of unhealthy food and guidance, yet, I strongly believe that unless every individual give up their sick habits with regard to unhealthy eating habits and lack of physical exercise and style of living cannot be uplift
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33428571429 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9211976856 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622857142857 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.7129482834 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.615384615 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9230769231 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208020896292 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648130294596 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325525041084 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118914219777 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129925009857 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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