nowadays more and more people are choosing to live with friends or alone rather than with their families. This trend is likely to have a negative impact on communities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The world is becoming more and more modern with the development of technology in communication and transportation and at the same time, a lot of people tend to move out to live with their friends or alone. Although some say that this trend has a negative effect on communities, I strongly believe that their more benefits than drawbacks.
One of the main reasons why people oppose this idea is the relationship between children and their families would be broken down. They believe that when young adults are busy with work and friends, hence, they would not consider their families as important as those used to be. As a matter of fact, they are easily affected by the bad behaviors of their close friends or of those they are living with. They may study smoke, drink, use drugs, and so on. Moreover, living with family means having people share someone's sorrow and unhappiness while living alone leads to loneliness and sadness.
From the opposite viewpoint, there are numerous advantages. First, moving out is a sign of growing up and taking responsibility. Some argue that when a person leaves the comfort of their home, they become considerably more self-reliant. Second, a sense of independence combined with a high level of privacy is seen as the most desirable aspect of a happy existence. The reason is that living a life on their own allows them to invest precious time in the development growth and shaping out their personality. They get to do whatever they like and live without strings. Finally, individuals are more likely to attend more public social events, helping cities and metropolitan regions to revitalize as they spend more money on vacations, outdoor activities, and other services.
Having considered a range of arguments, I have concluded that the benefits of living away from families are far and wide.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, hence, if, may, moreover, second, so, while, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99022801303 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72601268486 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602605863192 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9258339306 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.133333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34918008891 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101173844583 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076507948613 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207405889168 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0934759610886 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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