Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
In the modern days, there is an increase in the number of people with the intention of giving birth to children lately.
Overall, there are a lot of reasons for them to do so. And the first one to be mentioned is flow of the modern life. since it becomes faster and faster than ever, people tend to dedicate most of their time to working. The emblem of this hard-working society is more than half of the day of people is occupied by their careers. Consequently, that leads to lack of time spent on building their home. More else, financial problem is a serious defiance which must be taken into consideration before people want to have kids. Today, majority of people finds it hard to make end meets. As a result, be responsible for bringing up their children can be quite challenging because of the daily life expenses. kids might be a burden if the family is not well off. so the priority of people is to have a steady budget.
On the other hand, the decision to have children later in life may have some drawbacks both society and family life. parents having kids at old age are likely to find it hard to get on well with their children since their off-springs reach the adolescent period. The children will also feel their parents' conventional thought troublesome. Further more, infants given birth by old-age people are risk of suffering from both mental and physical disabilities. To each family it can be a tragedy and to society, that weakens the social labour force.
In conclusion, the surge of people deciding to have children in the later period is reasonable, however they should think of the considerably consequence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, may, so, well, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71777003484 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5694968335 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3889639028 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6470588235 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355071790299 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968533222839 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693602953149 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188503673679 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849302022799 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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