Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
These days, there is an upward tendency in the trend of delaying having children among couples. From my perspective, the advantages of this statement outweigh the disadvantages and in this essay, I will put forward some reasons and prove my opinion.
To commence with, for a growing number of people, including women, having children is a serious problem they need to consider for a period of time. As they have to deal with many issues such as salary, unemployment and economic crisis, childbirth is definitely not their priority. In order to bring up a baby, they need to be able to afford their offspring’s education, health care and other expenses.Therefore, this could be a burden for many people. Furthermore, people deciding to become parents late could have suffered from childhood traumas, such as being abused or mistreated. This has put a scar on their souls and they do not want their future children to be in the same circumstances as theirs. In fact, those people need time to heal themselves and be ready to welcome their children.
Undeniably, having children late allows people to focus on their careers and solving personal issues so that their future babies can be well-cared for by their parents and get the best life conditions. People as well don’t have to worry about giving up their jobs because of having kids if they are financially independent. However, having kids at an old age can sometimes be risky and have a profoundly negative impact on babies.In reality, there will possibly be a generation gap between children and old parents.Therefore, there are several consequences regarding this.
In conclusion, becoming parents late may have pros and cons but I believe the advantages outweigh the drawbacks and the things that are important for couples who want to have kids are the right time and suitable age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01302931596 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90006569098 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57654723127 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.4907398187 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.25 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275540010352 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105626855632 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432112214101 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163503859379 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373630701168 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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