Nowadays, more and more women decide to have children later in their life? why? Does the advantage outweigh the disadvantage?
Over the past few decades, the number of women who decide to give birth later in their life has increased rapidly. There are numerous reasons behind this phenomenon, and I believe this trend has more benefits than drawbacks.
First and foremost, there are two main reasons for having a baby late in people’ lives. To begin with, these days, people spend more and more of their time working and dedicating all of their life to their career. For example, young people prefer to attach more weight to their professional lives rather than their personal ones, in order to achieve stable jobs, and opportunities for career advancement. In addition, upbringing an infant is not an easy job, and most parents aren’t unwilling to welcome a newborn into their life, it takes time to get used to it, and start a new chapter.
As to the impacts of delayed parenthood on society, I would contend that any potential advantages of this trend are outweighed by its significant disadvantages. One of the main positives is that it provided a unique opportunity for parents to fully-prepared prior to having a newborn. This allows them to improve their financial and social conditions to support their families such as renting accommodation, attending parenthood class and so on.Thus, when their baby is born, parents will be fully-experienced about taking care of a toddler and giving their child a fulfilling life. Secondly, older parents are more knowledgeable and well-behaved, in contrast to eighteen year old individuals who haven't the necessary experience of life and can not either correctly upbringing a child, nor can not adequately ensure an infant's needs like diapers, milk and an accurate meal.
In conclusion, there are numerous reasons why women decide to have a baby in their later life due to their careers, and not well-prepared for bearing a newborn. Nevertheless, there is no doubt that the potential risks and drawbacks are outweighed the benefits. Hopefully, in the future, parents will think carefully about having a baby based on their conditions.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 446, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...n, attending parenthood class and so on.Thus, when their baby is born, parents will ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 698, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...st to eighteen year old individuals who havent the necessary experience of life and ca...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, such as, in contrast to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13946587537 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91612143633 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581602373887 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.0051997235 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.230769231 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9230769231 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9230769231 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308933331043 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105293093688 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777979297179 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195714297608 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361735837431 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 446, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...n, attending parenthood class and so on.Thus, when their baby is born, parents will ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 698, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...st to eighteen year old individuals who havent the necessary experience of life and ca...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, such as, in contrast to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13946587537 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91612143633 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581602373887 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.0051997235 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.230769231 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9230769231 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9230769231 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308933331043 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105293093688 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777979297179 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195714297608 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361735837431 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.