Nowadays more people are choosing to socialise online rather than face to face is this a positive or a negative development?
one serious problem which is increasing nowadays many people prefer to meet and talk online that could eventually lead someone in isolation for this talk I believe this development has far reaching negative impact on personal growth full stop
Moreover, in past before the advent of social networking people used to prefer to go out in bars restaurants and cafes where they could sit and talk in person and this thing was very beneficial for relaxing mind and helping in decreasing stress level, but now online Socialisation takes place in majority of people living along at home and there at their rooms without meeting others and this thing is pushing them into isolation and this leads to mental disruption in the ended up with depression.
Futhermore, one of the many negative impacts of this that teenagers are very easy prey of online hackers besides due to lack of knowledge about parents of social media teenagers could become the victim of hackers in addition to this, online socialisation can be dangerous because one is not aware that the person is using fake information and hiding real characteristics have end this is lethal for everyone. Albeit, social networking can cause huge problems such as conversation and shared pictures which had been forgotten can reappear and intimate communication with close friends can resurface which creates huge embarrassment for anyone.
To conclude, one must be aware of the dangers that social media platforms are providing online socialisation can also retards the mental growth of an individual. However we are living in a globalised world where Internet is becoming necessary day by day when I have to remain vigilant all the time
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| 2021-05-30 | Faisal Gaffar | 67 | view |
| 2021-05-30 | Faisal Gaffar | 67 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'retard'
Suggestion: retard
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, moreover, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10469314079 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71870638584 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613718411552 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.2975951904 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 224.345626211 49.4020404114 454% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 282.8 106.682146367 265% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.4 20.7667163134 267% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.6 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169048287499 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736873043012 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707276340991 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107029296483 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483578478261 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.3 13.0946893788 231% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.65 50.2224549098 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.1190380762 237% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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