Technology drive the world, people can not make to stop use of instrument machine so more human rely on upcoming advance technologies. Robot have lot of ability to diminish hardwork make it for easier work for people. In each coin have two side, folk are more depend on robot and other side technology help to improve the quality of life.
There are several reasons human are used to machine. Firstly old people are not capable to do hardworking so robot can help them to reduce burden on work for elder people. The human can do it work on indoor and outdoor they are tired because of lot of work but walk along with the technology led to less time accomplish work. Human in past time lot of doing hardwork but nowdays machine uplift than each and every filed growth of machinery development is dramatically soar.
On the flip side, robot also improve the home and work but folks day by day lazy and human forget about the hard work and exercise than many ailments develop in our body. Folks are more attractive or technology than several work to stopped and lot of loss on business way. Some time plunder men can snatch the personal information with the help of robot and hack the website the more affect on marketing and business.
To conclude, machinery robot can led to help work it home and office but men can not forget about physical exercise and maintain body and stay away life health and fitness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'drives'.
Suggestion: drives
Technology drive the world, people can not make to stop ...
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Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
... to less time accomplish work. Human in past time lot of doing hardwork but nowdays machi...
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Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'soared'.
Suggestion: soared
...f machinery development is dramatically soar. On the flip side, robot also improv...
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Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun work seems to be countable; consider using: 'several works'.
Suggestion: several works
... are more attractive or technology than several work to stopped and lot of loss on business ...
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Line 5, column 385, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... of robot and hack the website the more affect on marketing and business. To conclude,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61904761905 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2657861435 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3457538334 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.818181818 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0879360492902 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036662697336 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349162933755 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0579960000002 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295784049289 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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