Cycling is cheaper compared to other private transportation. Bicycle more eco-friendly because less and low maintenance cost are available. In this essay I will discuss why is not popular and how to soar in popularity.
Firstly, cycling only more eco-friendly with labour work because they economic is very low and other rich men more coin to buying expensive car and two wheeler they show me a symbol of society. Bicycle only most in early morning people use in exercise purpose and student or human walling to reached college's or work there are far away place so cycling take so much time, but private car can reached home or office within few minutes. Human have lot of money to spend on time on bought on car, clothing and fashionable item and build a symbol of society. Bicycle is only one or two men comfortable with sit and car have six or seven sit available and maybe more it's depends on car size and design.
On the other side, promoted program should be conduct amid the folks. In college or group of staff work men can encourage to each other. World health organization investigated that there are more benefits of bicycle used for instance of maintain fitness level and diminish the obesity and increase the powerful immunity system. There are Bollywood and Hollywood heroes can make afford to use and advertise to impact on popular bicycle.
To conclude, nowadays cycling seem to be a only low economic can afford and welthly human more coin spend on facinated car.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'wheeler' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'wheelers'.
Suggestion: wheelers
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Line 7, column 42, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, may, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81640625 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5120042606 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58984375 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1878669188 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0500949472234 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0202042279872 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283072105352 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.030972548205 0.151304729494 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296381395077 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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