Nowadays music and newspapers are available online. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such services? Give your own opinion followed by relevant examples.
Accelerated technological development has enabled the physical newspapersth nto e-newspapers. In the post internet era, the music market has also flourished online. F observed, and this essay shall discuss them further in detail
The internet enables fast transmission of digital dat owadays. Since the time many media companies decided to share their work online
both these phenomenon, certain merits and demerits have be en detail a, and is used by almost everyone there has been a rampant demand of news articles and music albums and songs that people want to download from the internet. Scores of sites now offer music, while hundreds of others summ Moreover, since it's free, it's all the more beneficial for the people. However the media arise news and this reaches more consumers than ever online. businesses have been said to be fallen on hard times. The problem seems to be that the internet has expanded the audience for media, but has also destroyed the market for it
The media houses have been observed of not collecting enough of the revenue being senerated by their work. Over the past decade, much of the value created by music and newspapers has benefited other.companies-pirates and respected technology firms alike Part of the problem is widespread piracy unauthorised distribution that doesn't benefit creators or the companies that invest in them. This dynamic doesn't only hurtthe media conglomerates It creates problems for independent artists and compames ofnothe every size, big and small This is the biggest disadvantage regarding this issue as it defeats the core purpose of developing creative content
To conclude I'd say one of the most exciting
aspects of the internet is to make informationds free for all But when it starts hindering the growth of newspaper and music industries. and leads to their decline, I feel strong law enforcements should be executed
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- Nowadays music and newspapers are available online What are the advantages and disadvantages of such services Give your own opinion followed by relevant examples 67
- Nowadays music and newspapers are available online. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such services? Give your own opinion followed by relevant examples.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, regarding, so, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2262295082 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87430114895 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645901639344 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.904024981 49.4020404114 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.909090909 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7272727273 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0661153797813 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0253759301023 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292521826988 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0307671716844 0.151304729494 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224385262583 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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