Nowadays, not enough students choose science subject in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society.
Science programs are less selected by students at university over the world today. This essay will explain the causes and possible effects emerge from these causes.
It seems that the cost of science courses is the main reason why many students barely choose science at college. This intimation might be proven as majority of universities set higher prices for science courses. There are many science-related programs at universities such as pharmacy, engineering and medical which admission fee is costly in each semester. Another cause is the difficulty of science subject, making the students hesitate for taking science. For examples, math, physics, chemistry and biology are considered difficult for learners because of their complexities and many students tend to choose social programs at college which is less difficult compared to science subjects.
Leading to possible effects, firstly, science subjects are probably being neglected in the future and this will be able to cause a limitation of professions which relate to science like scientist, doctor and engineer, meaning that community service will decrease thanks to unavailability of these profession. In addition, slow development in nation could be happen especially development in the field of science, since science-related subject are unfavorable for learners nowadays.
In conclusion, it is evident that there are two causes (the cost and the difficulty) which make science less favorable as a subject for student at university. The effects of this phenomenon are limited public service due to lack of vital professions which relate to science, and slow science development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this profession' or 'these professions'?
Suggestion: this profession; these professions
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56573705179 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92421594148 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557768924303 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2352431717 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281516548413 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123087090755 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410294670191 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174022864533 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678803656602 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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