Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society?
The fact that a large number of countries no longer have their natural subject popular among students concerns a lot of people. Even though the cause of this phenomenon is clear, no one is quite sure about how it might affect the society.
Science used to be a hot topic for a long period of time and people who follow
such areas are highly respected in their community. However, even though their prestige is still conserved, their fame is not. Young people these days have more attention to people in the entertainment industry than people in the research industry. This leads to a trend that more people are wanted to become singers or actors than become scientists. Moreover, people in these industries do not get as highly paid as other industries and since we are living in a world where the higher you get paid, the more respect you earn. You can only pursue the subject if you have a good background, which includes having a well-off life even without a monthly salary, or have a huge passion for such a thing. Otherwise, it is harder than ever.
So how do this phenomena affect the public? Because fewer people are in the laboratory, there are less likely than any groundbreaking findings will be seen as frequently as how it used to be. And because of that, it is going to take humanity more time to evolve scientifically. On the other hand, the slowing down in progressing on this side of the civilization could be a sign of stronger growth on the other side. It is clear that many other subjects are getting more popular, such as economics or computer science. These subject helps to develop the economic and technological side of the world, and as to how humankind has seen it, the world still has a quite steady development. In addition, the growth of these subjects nurtured the stability of science subjects, as the richer a country gets, the more money can be donated to scientific research, which means less analyst have to suffer to pay their bills, and the more advanced computers get, the fewer time examiners have to analyze their statistic.
All in all, the reason for scientific subjects lose their popularity is due to the growth of other subjects. Although there are negative effects on the public, it does not hurt much.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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Suggestion: period
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, still, well, as to, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74683544304 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56136980657 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524050632911 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4315180373 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.166666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9444444444 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109046898885 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352699153323 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316698487389 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741587810764 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270396510943 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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