Nowadays parents are sending their children on trips abroad for educational purposes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
In recent times, there is an increasing number of parents who send their children on trips abroad for educational purposes. This newly established practice provides their children valuable and enriching experience. However, it may also have some disadvantages to it.
Education is one of the most valuable asset a person can have and can be obtained throughought experience, traveling the world and meeting new cultures. Having this in mind, if a parents want their child to become an educated indivudal, they should try to send their child on some kind of a venture to the world in an early age. There are a lot of summer schools, events, volunteer organizations with wide variety of purposes for families to send their younger members to. This kind of exposure and experience will broaden their views and develop their characters in a unique way. Additonaly, there is a high possibilty of them encountering interesting indiviudals of their age and form friendships.
On the other hand, these trips are usually very expensive and can take a financial toll on an average family. Moreover it can put a lot of pressure on the child, who is probably too young not to get stressed about it. Going abroad means that the child will be seperated from it’s family and friends. In fact, chilren will most likely be scared to go to foreign country because they might not yet realise the benefits they can gain in the long run. Coupled with high expenditures, sending children abroad for eduactional purpose will not be the easiest decision for a parent to make.
If someone was sent to a summer school or something similar at an early age, he will be very grateful and will appreciate what his parents have done for him. That action helped develop him into a person he is today. Although prices are high, those families who are more fortunate than others should seriously consider their children to experiencing life abroad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, in fact, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96307692308 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68537304715 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590769230769 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2937107025 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8125 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331764579662 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102042323498 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111239117947 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219931812782 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124603987206 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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