Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children. What is the reason for doing this? Is this a negative or positive development?
In today’s modern world, success has become the factor of measurements in society which leads to the fact the more parents are having the tendency to put their children under great pressure to achieve maximum in numerous aspects of life. This essay will attempt to shed light on the contributing factors of this phenomenon which brings about several detrimental effects to the children.
To commence with, there are some reasons why parents put too much tension on their offspring. Firstly, they always expect their children to achieve better results which might bring a lot of opportunities for them in the future. For example, most parents want their son or daughter to become a doctor or police in the future which urges them to force their children to suffer from tremendous pressure of studying. Another radical reason would be the fear of parents that their young offspring will make wrong decisions. In the eyes of moms and dads, their children are always immature and childish. This conception explains the parents’ involvement in every big decision of the young such as job decisions or marriage.
However, in my perspective, the severe control and involvement of elders might negatively affect kids’ development. Mental problems, such as depression or autism, could be a result of suffering overloaded pressure. For instance, every year South Korea has recorded the highest ratio of students who committed suicide because of stress of study which their parents put on them. Besides, forcing too much pressure on the kids would result in serious arguments among family members and even destroy their relationship. Especially for juveniles, they would have the tendency to confront their parents, behave aggressively and do opposite things as the elder expect, and committing illegal activities would be the worst outcome. There was research showing that most young criminals said that they were very disappointed about their families.
In conclusion, despite parents’ enforcement might help children to achieve better outcomes, I reckon that it would create several disadvantages to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, for example, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35240963855 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69643257978 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596385542169 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9623090627 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.466666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330191808504 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101454217257 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593548629485 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181943095618 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888025221676 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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