Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone’ life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is negative. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The development of business in today’s life has led to the increasing presence of advertisements that can be seen everywhere. While many believe that promoting products might bring about various drawbacks, I advocate the idea that advertisements would benefit human life in different ways.
On the one hand, there are some unexpected outcomes resulting from overwhelming advertisements. Firstly, people seem to be manipulated by watching promotions, especially the young, which leads them to purchase dispensable products. For example, under the manipulation of provocative ads, young adults have the tendency to buy new flagship smartphones to follow the trend even though their current devices are still in good condition. Consequently, individual expenses will increase and little budget would be saved for later purposes. Secondly, the broad presence of advertisements might cause annoyance and frustration. Every time people surf the Internet or watch a video on Youtube, an abundance of promoting videos will appear which interrupt their relaxation time.
On the other hand, the surge of advertisements has brought various benefits in terms of society and the economy. Obviously, advertising enables companies to promote their new-released commodities to a larger group of people in order to approach their potential customers. Hence, this would boost up their revenue contributing to the development of the economies of many countries. Besides the impact on the economy, advertisement has positively influenced society as this helps to reduce the ratio of unemployment. There would be more jobs for citizens who love creativity and imagination which is required in the field of advertisement.
In conclusion, although advertising might create undeniable disadvantages, I personally reckon that the benefits it brings about are more significant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25971960463 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650909090909 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.097884528 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.142857143 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125720570579 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434399378731 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338669901818 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774272145868 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276655637536 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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