Nowadays ,people are able to use the internet to do an increasing number of tasks
Is this a positive or negative development?
At present internet is gaining ground among people.This is totally advantageous since it enables those to save their valuable time.In addition people might avoid expending their money to different things.
First,people who tend to use the internet are more likely to save their time.To illustrate,if those have hectic lifestyle,they prone not to have time for shopping,in this case they might book the cloths and shoes that they want online.By this way they can get rid of strolling in shopping malls hours in order to find appropriate clothes.Also,employees have to work with excessive documents,if they use internet for this purpose they can save their time for other activities such as leisure,sleeping and spending time with family.
Second,saving money is another reason why this trend is entirely positive.Whereas poor people become ill,for example they do not have pay a great deal of money to make an appointment with professional doctor as well as for treatment.There are so many reliable websites on the internet that could help for them to recover from various disease including cold,headache,heart problems.There is no charge for this.As a result,those people can economise their finance and spend it on other expense’s
By way of conclusion,using internet for doing various tasks can give numerous benefits involving managing their time on other activities together with saving their money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, well, whereas, as for, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4930875576 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40505911451 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640552995392 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.2975951904 355% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 196.266825181 49.4020404114 397% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 397.333333333 106.682146367 372% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.3333333333 20.7667163134 348% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 36.6666666667 7.06120827912 519% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144062245817 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944653688202 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327393587756 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885940763267 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227306977328 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.6 13.0946893788 310% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.06 50.2224549098 -20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.5 11.3001002004 288% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.75 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.21 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.1190380762 304% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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