Nowadays people depend on technology for leisure activities. Is this a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, It is common that people are deploying technology for entertaining in their leisure time. In my opinion, even though there are certain benefits associated with using modern technology for recreational activities, the drawbacks from this trend would overshadow its merits.
It is thought that the deployment of technology and users' health deterioration have a close correlation. Firstly, excessive exposure to the screen of technical instruments is the precursor of eye-related illnesses. Likewise, game, which is a popular form of etertaining activities is believed to cause addiction among its users. This is especially the case for the young game players, who have the tendency to spend many hours a day playing games. In addition to this, if people keep their posture over long period for playing games, watching online movies, their spine are at greator risk of being damaged.
Another negative impact of using technological inventions for leisure activities is that it is the main culprit of sedentary lifestyle, which links directly to many mental and physical health issues among people. One of the drawbacks of the way of life is that people may feel socially-isolated, thereby being afraid to establish and maintain relationships with others, which in turn have negative impact on people's social lives. This lifestyle is also responsible for the lack of physical activities of people, which is the precursor of obesity.
Admittedly, utilization of technologycal equipment and software for entertainment offers their players and audience with various options, captivating design, and interesting functions. However, these features are aimed for remain users longer on these platforms, which in the long time exacurbates the effects on people's well-being.
In sum, many health problems can be attributable to the use of technology for entertaining purpose, albeit the activities provide people with certain merits related to users' experience. I believe that this phenomenon is a negative movement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, may, so, well, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61563517915 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0607143078 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589576547231 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3197075349 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.142857143 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308659615525 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106281890202 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632270995356 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178222304016 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609465743145 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.