Nowadays, people have free access to music and videos online. Is this a positive or negative development?
At the present time , with the development of technology in networking , the online access to entertainment and educational videos has become mighty fast. People with modern day smart phones can enjoy and learn through free media available at different websites. This is definitely a positive development due to factors discussed below in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost, the students and even the working class who has the requirements of learning latest topics in their respective fields can very well have an easy lectures or tutorials readily available without charge on various platforms such as You tube, Wikipedia et cetra. To elaborate , especially in the field of medicine where doctors in their busy schedule often find hard to visit conferences and teaching institutes , the online access to the videos posted by experts keep them updated . Futhermore , even housewives can learn a lot regarding different recipes and cooking processes posted by top chefs of the world. To exemplify , online survey done by Google in 2017 shown the top ranked searched videos were related to food business . Thus , people from every walk of life is benefitted from easy and free availability of educational videos .
Moreover, music and entertainment videos availability has not only made lives more interesting but also an incredible way of learning such arts. In other words, with convenience in procuring music videos anywhere through internet people can listen to their favorite numbers, watch dance videos. Hence , learning can go hand in hand with pleasure. In comparison to past when there was limited availability of different kinds of music albums, nowadays, there is whole lot of variety available online. For example, a survey done by United States census bureau in 2017 across New Your city on sales of music gadgets revealed in the declining demands of music gadgets such as stereos, I pads, walkman et cetera . Rather people are more reliant on their cell phones for the same.
In conclusion, the free of charge accessibility of music and videos has brought the world closer and more learned. This development has made a positive impact on the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26224783862 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77473401017 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596541786744 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8743033398 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.125 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304458094988 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915978243077 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649650080347 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201536194642 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835923835412 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.