Nowadays, people have free access to music and videos online. Is this a positive or negative development?
In recent times many people prefer to live alone, especially in metropolitan cities. Rise in industrialization has shifted the employment base in and around the major cities making employees to stay away from their hometown and family. Although living alone has its own hurdles, I firmly believe that it is a positive development.
First and foremost, staying apart from loved ones not only teaches essential household chores but also helps in shaping one’s personality stronger. Though in the initial phase it looks like a mountain to climb especially for youngsters whose growing years were mostly supervised by parents or guardians. Being a singleton makes them more independent and also improve their personal skills such as cooking, washing the clothes, cleaning the house, paying bills and many more. For instance, research has shown the students from boarding schools who have stayed in hostels since early age are more skilled than day boarders and they cope up better with the challenges thrown by life in all perspectives.
Moreover lone dwellers tends to travel and enjoy more than their couple counterparts . While people living with families finds it difficult to be more adventurous due to family commitments , single people have additional time and finances to fulfill their desires. This has led to the development of cities where night life has become the integral part of social life and also the tourist destinations has flourished with increasing number of people visiting them. Thus , surge in overall expenditure of single person cannot be matched by a family man. For example, a survey done by the United States Census Bureau in 2016 in New York city about the modern day expenses by the inhabitants of the city revealed that the main contributors of revenue in entertainment and travelling industries are from the people who are living on their own .
To encapsulate, a lone inhabitant is not only more self – dependent but also has supplemental time and resources to enjoy every aspect of modern life as compared to a person living with family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, thus, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18397626113 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77277340846 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635014836795 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.7334768405 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.384615385 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9230769231 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0766051855277 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0264219192494 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347398344991 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0405252156134 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376509802099 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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