It has been stated that the vital role of nature are less considered among individuals. This essay attempts to illuminate the driving factors behind this tendency before elucidating some measures to tackle this problem.
To begin with, there are two primary reasons why people are indifferent to the natural word. One of the most justifications is that those take their professional career as well as personal life as the foremost priority, which make them hardly split their time for society or world surround. To elaborate, they prefer to spend a long hours at the workplace or chatting with their friends to achieve success and enrich their life rather than enhance awareness about the nature. Another salient rationales is that childrens, they have a paucity of education in terms of natural that happened in the globe. This perception could be clarified by the fact that school curriculum concentrate more to academic subjects which let children have more greater chances to get high-paying jobs.
Aknowledging such rationales, concreate actions are urgently conducted to combat this worrying issue. The first solutions is that promoting server issues, and consequences of lack of knowledge about the natural world through communication media. Given the dissemination, people who often exposed information about the nature in the world can gain heightened awareness. Furthermore, school should use proper lessons to encourage students learn more about nature in the world. For example, teachers allow children explore and present about natural world and repercussions caused by lack of awareness about that.
In conclusion, personal life as well as inproper education are likely to blame form insufficient awareness about the importance of the natural world, people can learn more about it through media platforms or school curriculum. It is recommended that each individuals should raise knowledge about natural world to have a better life in years to come.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 333, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'hour'?
Suggestion: hour
... elaborate, they prefer to spend a long hours at the workplace or chatting with their...
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Line 2, column 735, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'greater' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: greater
...ademic subjects which let children have more greater chances to get high-paying jobs. Aknow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42810457516 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80169061268 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604575163399 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3262840301 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.642857143 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428805014797 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143365821527 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109935631746 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250907824255 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148861833313 0.056905535591 262% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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