Nowadays, architectural designing is becoming advanced. These advancements can be observed in institutes and official buildings. Although, open-space architecture offers many merits to individual workers or staff, however this development has some disadvantages also. Apropos of the statement it seems a positive development.
To begin with, open-space architecture can be used for multi purposes. To enumerate, open-space can be used for other programs rather than official work and study such as arts competitions in schools, parties in offices as well as for other various purposes that the other designed buildings can not offer. Thus, it seems true that open-space constructed buildings are more useful in comparison with buildings having separate rooms. Moreover, it is also advantageous for employer to have an open-space designed building, because it allows to give commands to employees at single place and it is easy to moniter activities of workers at single area. For example, bosses needed to give instructions to staff at different places because of different areas, but a single open-space offer convenience to employer from this hussle.
However, as every coin has two sides. This development has also one biggest bad impact on individuals when an open-area is used to do different tasks at single place. To explain, workers face distractions from other workers doing a different work at the same time. For instance, a employee doing official work can never do his/her task with proper concentration, if there are noises produced by the work the other workers during same schedule.
To recapitulate, an open-space structure has many pros in terms of multiuses that outweigh cons. Thus, it is undoubtely a positive development.
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- Nowadays some buildings such as offices and schools have open space design instead of separate rooms Why is it so Do you think this is a positive or negative development 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: giving
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, as for, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51111111111 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06513649425 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585185185185 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.708556966 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238230426835 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798002503899 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573537508563 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136046724451 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486257928842 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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