Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing(for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening.
In these day information technology is multiply being used to monitor what people are saying and doing( for instance, through smartphone observing and security cameras). In many circumstances, the people being controlled are unaware that this is happening.
Nowadays information technology capable of everything. Since technology is evolving day by day. All over we utilize technology for production, teaching, protection and checking. As well as security cameras are being installed for controlling organisation, markets, salons, shops and educational systems. One person can be watched everywhere, everybody in monitor. As checker determine what people are doing and saying. In additionally security cameras do not require numerous people. Especially cameras set at edge of room. People don’t notice what the camera is watching them do. Through these cameras we can be detected offenses and various situation and there will be fair end. Now cameras are also being put on the roads. Because path accidents are not always monitored by road patrol services. Cameras are also used to check applicants even during admission. Even though applicants use crib within exam.
Other mode of checking is cellphone . Everybody can be connected from another smartphone to own smartphone. We able to know all secret and what are they doing. Either smartphones have deal programs for checking.
In conclusion, I think technique of controller benefit to educational systems and detection outlaws. However watching personal affairs and following their self will be disadvantages. As that shall destroy relationships of people and cause miserable happening.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
In these day information technology is multiply bein...
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Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'multiplied'.
Suggestion: multiplied
In these day information technology is multiply being used to monitor what people are s...
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Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ation technology capable of everything. Since technology is evolving day by day. All ...
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Line 3, column 727, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ameras are also being put on the roads. Because path accidents are not always monitored...
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Line 3, column 866, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...check applicants even during admission. Even though applicants use crib within exam. Othe...
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Line 4, column 36, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...m. Other mode of checking is cellphone . Everybody can be connected from another...
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Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...cational systems and detection outlaws. However watching personal affairs and following...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, well, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65991902834 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96979022933 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643724696356 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9172140672 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.7826086957 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.7391304348 20.7667163134 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.73913043478 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.463154643678 0.244688304435 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109160399941 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940114819499 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26514713007 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.188563652501 0.056905535591 331% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.6 11.3001002004 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.36 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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