In today's world woman are getting more job offers rather than man. If you compare past three decades woman are not allowed to go for jobs. Hence, in contemporary days, organization incline to present more chances to woman because they mentally strong to finish given targets. Unfortunately, Some physical work cannot perform by woman.
In most of organisation willing to take woman because they will not change the work often and even they will obey what the management says. They are keen to complete their goals. In addition, they keep the work place very calm and presentable. For instance, Man cannot maintain quietness though, he engaged with work but can do that so. Software related jobs like: IT and networking they prefer mostly girls. Man are rarely taken by those companies.
Conversely, there are some jobs cannot done by woman still it requires physical strength. For Example, Construction jobs requires people who can life and carry heavy materials from one to another place.This kind of activity works women cannot dominate man. Moreover, both man and woman are into this field but only man are able sustain long into this type of works.
In conclusion, man and woman are these days but, woman are getting more offers are received by woman not for man. This may create cause in family because woman will draw more salary than man. Moreover, between husband and wife will start egos. Ultimately, families will lose peace and end up with divorce. However, both sex have equal right to follow there ambitions.
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- Dear John,Hope this letter finds you in good health and sprits .It feel great to receive an invitation from you end to come and stay with you in your native country .Therefore , I would like you to equip me with some information .Firstly, in an endeavor t 84
- Nowadays there are more opportunities for women than there were in the past. Some people believe this situation has caused problems than is has solved. What are your opinions on this ? 61
- In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details. 66
- Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and caused to helpless animals that are killed. All blood sports should be banned. Discuss the main arguments for this 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02745098039 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3552407064 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63137254902 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9112189686 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2222222222 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94444444444 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13340466593 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406842184066 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515647039372 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858330569849 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372967354377 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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