Nowadays, In most of the country people wanted to live in evolution vicinity because things will be easier compare to stay in rural areas.Nevertheless, humankind still likes to reside in the suburbs and out of the city.We can access things if we live in the city center moreover ,it will very convenient to obtain better things.Whereas, If we stay away from the city we cannot get many materials what we want? But, Some population believe staying out of town gives them peace and calm.
On the one hand, most of humanity thought of staying in the metropolitan will give them good status in their society and they can easily get the their work to be done .Even the education and hospitals will be close to reach .Some of them work in the city limit they cannot travel a lot from office to home.Keeping everything in mind they had decided to live in the cities.On the other hand, Many will not cheerful to live in that vicinity due to some necessity alone they will stick there.Why because?
metropolitan cities will have more traffic,no pure air and water these pollution will cause health issues so the other people will not like to live in the blooming cities .
In conclusion,these controversy will be favoring both but, in my opinion, living in blooming cities will give more opportunities and pleasure. Moreover, we access things quickly at our wish at our door steps,still considering the other one is also significant because above all we need good health to live long .Money we can earn where ever we stay. So, Comparing both, families and health is more important than money .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, whereas, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81751824818 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70811944771 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56204379562 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 154.27989407 49.4020404114 312% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 188.571428571 106.682146367 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.1428571429 20.7667163134 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.1428571429 7.06120827912 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20017952545 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106500098478 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433240387544 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124633569548 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192598872546 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.0946893788 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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