Many of the country,they allow student to work as part time employee or full time employee .If we give this opportunity to young children .Some adopt this chance to buildup their career ,whereas, most of the teenagers will use that money in wrong way.To avoid this scenario organisation who are ready to offer job should be keen to know weather the candidate are student .Therefore, If they are student try to ask he/ she are into full time or part time study .This will give you picture weather to offer job are not .
Being student they have huge responsibility to accomplish their education ,because there parents will have great dream about the children growth.We know only studies bring them victory in our competitive world .For instance, students skip there studies and getting hand full of money may cherish at that movement ,But in the long run they fail to succeed to nab the career.After losing the age and chance even thing will make you to regret. Instead ,of being loser get to know the life and search the job after finishing the studies that will give the brighter life .
TO conclude, considering above suggestion that will lead to success in you life time.Moreover, people who really wanting the job they will get a chance to maintain their family .Now, you offering way to them,In my opinion, unless if you are really in financial constrain do not take up the job while your perusing education.Be focus on your studies to have jubilant life.
- Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and caused to helpless animals that are killed. All blood sports should be banned. Discuss the main arguments for this 67
- Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both view and give your own opinion. 61
- Dear John,Hope this letter finds you in good health and sprits .It feel great to receive an invitation from you end to come and stay with you in your native country .Therefore , I would like you to equip me with some information .Firstly, in an endeavor t 84
- You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:Explain why you want to do the voluntary wo 78
- A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter•give contact details for when you are away•give instructions about how to care for your pet•describe other household duties 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
Many of the country,they allow student to work as part time empl...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...e country,they allow student to work as part time employee or full time employee .If we g...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 73, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...tudent to work as part time employee or full time employee .If we give this opportunity t...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 91, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...part time employee or full time employee .If we give this opportunity to young chi...
^^
Line 2, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...rt time employee or full time employee .If we give this opportunity to young child...
^^
Line 2, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rt time employee or full time employee .If we give this opportunity to young child...
^^
Line 2, column 138, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... give this opportunity to young children .Some adopt this chance to buildup their ...
^^
Line 2, column 140, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Some
...ive this opportunity to young children .Some adopt this chance to buildup their care...
^^^^
Line 2, column 186, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...dopt this chance to buildup their career ,whereas, most of the teenagers will use ...
^^
Line 2, column 252, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...nagers will use that money in wrong way.To avoid this scenario organisation who ar...
^^
Line 2, column 371, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...o know weather the candidate are student .Therefore, If they are student try to as...
^^
Line 2, column 373, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...know weather the candidate are student .Therefore, If they are student try to ask he/ she...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 423, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
... If they are student try to ask he/ she are into full time or part time study .Thi...
^^^
Line 2, column 432, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...are student try to ask he/ she are into full time or part time study .This will give you...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 445, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ry to ask he/ she are into full time or part time study .This will give you picture weat...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 460, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he are into full time or part time study .This will give you picture weather to o...
^^
Line 2, column 461, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e are into full time or part time study .This will give you picture weather to of...
^^
Line 2, column 463, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...are into full time or part time study .This will give you picture weather to offer ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 518, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...you picture weather to offer job are not . Being student they have huge respons...
^^
Line 4, column 74, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...onsibility to accomplish their education ,because there parents will have great dr...
^^
Line 4, column 146, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
...e great dream about the children growth.We know only studies bring them victory in...
^^
Line 4, column 210, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ng them victory in our competitive world .For instance, students skip there studie...
^^
Line 4, column 212, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... them victory in our competitive world .For instance, students skip there studies a...
^^^
Line 4, column 313, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ll of money may cherish at that movement ,But in the long run they fail to succeed...
^^
Line 4, column 374, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: After
... they fail to succeed to nab the career.After losing the age and chance even thing wi...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 449, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n thing will make you to regret. Instead ,of being loser get to know the life and ...
^^
Line 4, column 566, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...studies that will give the brighter life . TO conclude, considering above sugge...
^^
Line 6, column 76, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...estion that will lead to success in you life time.Moreover, people who really wanting the...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 86, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...t will lead to success in you life time.Moreover, people who really wanting the job they...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 177, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ll get a chance to maintain their family .Now, you offering way to them,In my opin...
^^
Line 6, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Now
... get a chance to maintain their family .Now, you offering way to them,In my opinion...
^^^
Line 6, column 208, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , In
...ir family .Now, you offering way to them,In my opinion, unless if you are really in...
^^^
Line 6, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n, unless if you are really in financial constrain do not take up the job while y...
^^
Line 6, column 326, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Be
...p the job while your perusing education.Be focus on your studies to have jubilant ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, whereas, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 252.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82142857143 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4833034115 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 618.680645161 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 20.1344086022 313% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.061849234 48.9658058833 300% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 303.75 100.406767564 303% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.0 20.6045352989 306% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.5 5.45110844103 413% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 34.0 5.5376344086 614% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188765615303 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106577031404 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635671816216 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133247465081 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502859289572 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.8 11.7677419355 279% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.99 58.1214874552 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 10.1575268817 263% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 10.002688172 270% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.0537634409 271% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.247311828 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.