In recent years, people have diverse perspectives about online transactions. Some people believe that public can take advantage of sending money by phone, others are worried about security. In my opinion, I agree with both side of thought. In this essay, I will dicuss the advantages and disadvantages of cashless transactions.
On the one hand, citizens can take many benefits from this trend. Firstly, they can send money for family more easily. With people who go to work abroador far from home, before having phenomenon of online transactions, they had to send money through shipping, post offices. But today, just a few steps, money can directly come to family. Secondly, cashless transactions help people organise spending. Whenever people purchase something by app, this app stores receipt. Therefore, they can count how much money they use, from which they can organise suitable spending. Lastly, thanks to banking online, going shopping becomes trouble. People cannot count exactly how much money they spend when going shopping. Thus, they usually meet situation that they don’t have enough money to buy what they want. As a result, purchasing becomes less complicated when society use cashless transactions.
On the other hand, online banking has its own disadvantages. The fist reason is its security. Many people concern that bad people make use of this trend to do illegal things. For example, they hack facebook and use this nick to borrow money, or even they hack phone and banking app to take out of money. Furthermore, old people have difficulty in using cashless transactions/ The elderly are not good at technology. Therefore, it is not a good idea to turn society into cashless society. Additionally, a cashless society is infeasible. Because the kids also need to purchase. However, majority of children are not allowed to use smartphones. As a result, it is impossible for young kids to by if society become cashless.
In conclusion, the use of cashless transactions brings many advantages. However, a group of people cannot take benefit of its.
- Nowadays there is a growing shift towards the use of cashless transactions While some people argue in support of a cashless society claiming that it is beneficial to citizens others raise concerns about security To what extent do you agree or disagree Use 61
- Nowadays there is a growing shift towards the use of cashless transactions While some people argue in support of a cashless society claiming that it is beneficial to citizens others raise concerns about security To what extent do you agree or disagree Use 84
- Nowadays there is a growing shift towards the use of cashless transactions While some people argue in support of a cashless society claiming that it is beneficial to citizens others raise concerns about security To what extent do you agree or disagree Use 73
- Nowadays there is a growing shift towards the use of cashless transactions While some people argue in support of a cashless society claiming that it is beneficial to citizens others raise concerns about security To what extent do you agree or disagree Use 67
- Nowadays there is a growing shift towards the use of cashless transactions While some people argue in support of a cashless society claiming that it is beneficial to citizens others raise concerns about security To what extent do you agree or disagree Use 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 536, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ally, a cashless society is infeasible. Because the kids also need to purchase. However...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2125748503 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75828461754 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583832335329 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7932182317 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.4814814815 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3703703704 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.40740740741 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222118059396 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686103065273 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063387445683 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15893049728 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055061355044 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.05 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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