Nowadays, there is an tend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than a positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or diagree.
Today, the News of media coverage regarding the hot issue and emergencies rather than impact positive in life. Many people have to think this is damage to personal and social. In my opinion , i not agree this point beacuse the negative new media bring more benefit than harm to individuals and society.
On the one hand, some people believe that if many pepeople see or hear News of media concentration on the problems and emergencies rather than a positive development which makes individual not only scare anything but also isolate in themselves life For instance, the rate of theft and stolen in the city experienced a sharp increase to over 30%in a month ago. The sequence, it makes almost person want not to go out except some crucial case. More and more some people doubt the policy of the government which they pay a lot of money for it by tax however it is not as expected previous time.
On the other hand in my personaly , there are two advantage when the problem and emergencies exposed by reports of media . Firstly, it is raise human awareness of social problem such as theft and robbery. Thank for that news the resident can alert to bad circumstance.The second if storm or tsuanmi appeare immediately the media would coverage antwhere and anywhen when it come mainland .Then l governments and authorities can figure out the feasible and timely measures to the serious problems.therefore they are able to minimize pity consequences before those obstacles become more colossal
In concluson, the rate of problem and emergencies exposed by media higher than the positive news . There bring more advantage than disadvantage to individual and society .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96774193548 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79031467418 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587813620072 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.714154351 49.4020404114 277% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.6 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279193226797 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106477364853 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545998654135 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181084389564 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649484257862 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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