In the future nobody will buy printed newspaper or book because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree this statement
Nowdays, the Digital Techonlogy is significant contributed in provide imfromation to reader than traditional media like as books or printed newspapers and magazines. they can read everything in everywhere when their devices was accessed to with free. However i do not totally agree the prineted newspapers or books were be replaced by the Internet.
In the future, we are double the development techonlogy bring more benifits and cheaper than in the life. In the past, the factory producted newpapers or paper they have cut many forests or tree for producted it. It is major result make to increase to polluted air and erosion land due on flood and tsunami in area. Beside they need amout payment for transported for customes or stores.Nevertheless, today the digetal technology is almost replace them make to way build e-book or digetal book or online when their devices was connected to Internet. Anywhere in home or outside the residents can see news or read books thoughout smartphone without payment .Futhermore the scientist desig e-book for blinder which they can read title book ,is speak them.
However, we are impact negative of Technologe in world . Instance, when she was driving and reading a newpapers in her phone this is lead to a serious accident in street .It is popular reasons which the rate number death people because of traffic accident is go up in the recent years by younger Beside the book is bringing to wide knowledge for everybody so, the older people usually prefer reading a real book than digatel book. Because they have many time for analysis the value of book more and more deeply emotion of writer.If the reader see many hours in screen,it will make easy to myopic.
In conclusion, althought the e-book ,digital book are tend to the development techonloy ,it was replaced by book or printer newpapers or magazine.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99676375405 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71279390674 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592233009709 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.1278717131 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.666666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219367358473 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747214285939 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525678303409 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134037748114 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480748727105 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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