Nowadays tourism has developed and contributed a significant portion of national income to its own country Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development and give your opinion
In this nonstop changing world, tourism has advanced itself by fusing with daily life and become a regular occurence. Some believe that its stable growth over the last few years has brought many benefits while others claim that the expansion in this kind of industrial field has lead to many social and environmental problems. This essay will focus on analyzing both sides of the matter.
On the one hand, touristry has brought back countless profits for the government in general and the local residence in particular. Needless to say, those in-office council has gotten the chance to raise the country's image to a higher level while improving its financial situation and economic growth. Moreover, the life of the citizens have also transformed as tourism field have created employment opportunities for several individuals. As a result, our country gets the chance to enhance both its reputation and affection to the world and make a step closer to globalization.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that such travelling activities have caused innumerable negative impact on the environment. Due to overpopulation, the demand for such leisure industry has sky-rocket over the past few years and people amd destroying the balance of the eco-system consciously and intentionally. Furthermore, such kind of maneuver will involve in the loss of resources and lead to shortage of energy. In consequence, both images and habitat of our country are seriously degraded.
In my experience, i strongly oppose the drawbacks of tourism field as there are more benefits and the demerits can easily be solved by raisimg the awareness of tourists.
To conclude, the upgrade of tourism has contribute to a country's economy while also unknowingly harm the sceneries of it. It is advisable that society should still invest in this kind of field but with a mindset to preserve the nature which was given to us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, while, as to, in general, in particular, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17475728155 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88469169091 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588996763754 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3514893413 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.214285714 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113564315518 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380404809739 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371254171028 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619423625936 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369144374665 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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