Nowadays, traffic is a serious problem in big cities. Why this is so and what effects does it bring?
a large number of populated dense cites have the same problem and that is traffic congestion .there are number of solution should be implemented to deal with this problem.
the best way for improving traffic in big city is improving public transportation such as metro and public bus. the reason for heavy traffic in cities with large amount of people in it is, there are too many cars in town and every person is using their own car for traveling through the city .therefor if you upgrade the public transportation also lowering the cost of it. it will encourage people to not use their own cars. as a result, it will lower the traffic rate.
the second solution is ,building large highway through and around the city and improving the road system. the other reason of traffic in big cities is that they didn't developed their street along side of their population growth. consciously, the old highway and streets doesn't meet the needs of the people for easily traveling through town. however, if the government build more highway and widen the width and length of the street it will have a great influence on lowering the traffic.
in conclusion if the government implement these solution that i mentioned above it will help the flow of the transportation and lowering the rate of the traffic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8125 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54067673373 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0030507686 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.8 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103189892495 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440954108269 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397906731826 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0699367432621 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035493129419 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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