Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development?
In our modern life cutting-edge technology has a big impact on day-to-day communication. While it boosts many relationships to a higher level, it also affect the behaviour between parents and their children. However, it is increasingly likely that beginning of the technological world is rather good news for everyone, than bad.
Using the modern devices has helped a lot of families to be closer already for many years. while it was impossible to keep in touch for those couples, who lived in different countries, now this problem entirely do not exist thanks to a vast amount of various social networks as well as messengers and video chats. To give an example, I have met really great people from far-off continents in Twitter and change with each other interesting traditions, histories, so, making friends in internet can help one to experience the culture first hand. Conversely, by sitting long hours in the net one will probably deteriorate the relationship with his parents, making a generation gap, because they will always tell him or her to leave the gadget and behave in the real life. For these reasons, to communicate now easier, than it was a couple of years ago; however due to this fact we can see a big crowds of people in their gadgets as well as in some cases worse relationship with older generation.
Meanwhile many people claim that this is a positive development with future progress. It goes without saying, that borders of countries are less visible, the tolerance has increased and the whole population on the planet are endeavoring to be closer. For the next few years we will have been closer than have ever been, because scientist are trying now to create some extraordinary technology to communicate without living a one's room. For example, due to a rise of current technology, some can even date in the internet and maybe meet his future best friend or a person, with whom he will have the healthiest relationship in his life.
All around the world, population interact much more with the modern technology, than with other ways of communication. Still, it is a great chance to meet someone who will help you to be a more broad-minded, but nobody should forget that we are living in a real life, not in a telephone. In spite of probable negative aspects of such a developing, it is a definitely great step into a future and tolerant attitude all around the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, however, if, may, really, so, still, well, while, for example, as well as, in some cases, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87591240876 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81003886047 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571776155718 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.5257864245 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.6 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218761222451 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666562525292 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701307173219 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112866208841 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031480834089 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.