Nuclear energy is a better choice for meeting increasing demand, agree or disagree?
Nowadays people are looking for an alternative way to provide more energy demand. some people think rather than fossil fuel, nuclear energy is a better choice. In my opinion, I am standing for this argument.
nuclear power has some benefits that other energy does not do. Firstly it is a sustainable energy source, meaning that it can be used to produce electricity without wasting limited natural resources like coal, oil or gas. As everyone knew, fossil fuels are being consumed at an alarming rate. Secondly, it is cleaner than fossil fuel, in other words, it can help us reduce carbon setting out which cause global warming. Finally, with the improvement in nuclear technology, it can provide more work opportunities and also make the industry do some innovation to become more efficient.
On the other hand, there are some aspects of these arguments. The safety of nuclear power is a considerable question. Once there is a dangerous accident happened, it would be a disaster. Thousands of people will be affected or be hurt. In addition, nuclear power station would cover enormous areas, getting rid of its own square, nobody wants to live near it. Moreover, it is a high cost to build a nuclear station, the expensive spending will impose a heavy financial burden on the government.
In conclusion, I do agree with the opinion that nuclear should be used more or less in some countries, such as some developed countries. However, the country’s development has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs, authorities are expected to improve the country international status and rise citizens standards of living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Some
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Suggestion: Nuclear
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19101123596 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86325117603 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644194756554 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6867627728 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.625 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3125 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161271538496 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523789398225 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056553940066 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103873855292 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774105296303 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.