in number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between locations. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transports. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
People have different views about transportation development. While some argue that to invest more on existing public transports is more urgent, i believe that to spend money on railway construction brings us more benefits.
On the other hand, to develop current transport will show us several positive features. Firstly, we already have foundation and to reinforce promoting the available system will take less money, time and efforts. Moreover, the improvement of existing public transports bring more convenience in moving for those who usually use them, especially students. The more comfortable this system is, the more effective works can be done by employees.
However, i firmly convince that it is more beneficial for governments and residents if they invest in railway construction. Initially, it will show our well-being infrastructure and development that can attract more investment from foreign enterprises. Additionally, fast trains will partly reduce the existing situation of being late for work which make work productivity decline dramatically. In this way, it certainly enriches our country not only in transportation field but also every aspects of our lives.
In conclusion, there are good reasons why people choose to spend money on current public transports, but in my opinion, governments should focus on developing rail construction for long-term benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...sting public transports is more urgent, i believe that to spend money on railway ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66826923077 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10589946738 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673076923077 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3199737867 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.181818182 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207763862381 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717434039799 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633754048546 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137879155156 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482264665511 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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