In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In various countries, some people think it is important to spend a huge number of money to build up a new railway lines for the train that link to the cities. other argue that it should be spend the money on enhancing existing public transport.
On one hand,a railway lines contain more benefit to those people that need to travel between the cities and it is a long-term construction. A railway system provide a fast way to transport from city to city. it must be the first choice to the tourism and the people that need to move from city to city. but railway lines have a disadvantage is that it cannot bring user to a specific location for example you and just bring people to london but you cannot bring them to the london bridge.people need another transportaion to go to some other accuracy location in a city. Also, it take a long time period to complete a railway lines. railway lines are not just set up a line and put the train on it, it take a number of time to decide the cover range, future planing and related facilities.
On the other hand, improving existing public transportation can have a immediate performance and provide more convineance to the citizens. different form constructing railway lines, it just take less time to improve the exsiting public transportation. We can save the time that used for constructing a new things and focus on improve the efficency of exsiting things. Meanwhile, public transportation can provide more convineance to the citizen. most of the them include bus and taxi can transport people to a specific place in a city for example, when people want to get to their home form center of city , most of them will use public transportation. but, this may cause some problems. first, people may need a longer time to arrive their destination when they using transportation such as bus because the bus will have a number of station and it need to stop serval time. other, the transportation will affect by the traffic congestion. different form the train, all public transportation will using the a road in a city. If there have some traffic accidence or there have many car in a same time, it will be a traffice congestion and increase the travel time.
To conclusion, construction of railway lines and improve public transportation have their own benifit and target customer. The government must have a compenhensive research to investigate which of them is more suitbale for future and persent development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, while, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2042.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80470588235 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86535787275 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449411764706 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.0 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5447293512 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.1 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329634459528 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108246129884 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917777822312 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247423210765 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159372967629 0.056905535591 280% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.