The number of plants and animals is declining. Explain this problem and suggest some solutions.
The decrease in the number of plants and animals is one of the environmental problems facing humans nowadays. This essay will give explanations of this phenomenon as well as some viable remedies people can take to address this issue.
There are several reasons accounting for this problem. Firstly, the surge in the needs of products made from natural materials such as medicine, paper leads to an increase in cutting down trees and hunting animals for economic profits. For example, the fact that thousands of elephants are killed annually to get ivories, which are believed to be an effective medical cure despite not being proved, might cause the extinction of elephants some days. Secondly, the irresponsible disposal of industrial wastewater into the water resource without any treatments can cause the death of animals drinking or living in that poisonous water as well as plants because of the deterioration of soil where they are grown. Although a great deal of untreated waste is dumped every day, there are no efficient waste treatment systems and laws to resolve this problem, so poor animals and plants still suffer from diseases.
People should take steps to deal with this issue led mainly by humans’ irresponsibility for nature. One of the most feasible solutions is enacting new laws that fine or even sentence someone who illegally cuts down trees and hunts wild animals for individual benefits. Moreover, politicians should introduce environmental taxes for industrial factories holding accountable for the decline in the number of plants and animals. The money gotten from the taxes should be spent on developing waste treatment technology so that animals and plants would consume clean water and not suffer from illness anymore. Finally, the government should raise the public’s consciousness in protecting natural species by encouraging citizens to participate in environmental campaigns that save endangered animals, and reduce the volume of paper used to diminish the number of trees cut.
In conclusion, the fall in the number of natural species is caused by some factors, and humans should make a contribution to addressing that serious problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33139534884 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79954991361 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575581395349 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.0549627355 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.076923077 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4615384615 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286994580425 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101979671312 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637945381368 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187994978881 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644955187866 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.