Obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Explain the main cause and solutions of this problem.
Over the recent years, the number of overweight citizens have increased at an alarming rate in numerous nations, which can be attributed to a variety of factors. In this essay, I plan to identify several drivers of this detrimental trend and propose feasible solutions.
There are two leading contributors to this pressing issue. First of all, a substantial number of individuals in modern society have an imbalanced diet. With the fast-paced living rhythm of today’s world, home-cooked, nutritious meals have been superseded by convenient sets of fried chicken wings and burgers as the latter is not only less time-consuming, but also more accessible thanks to the ubiquitous presence of fast food outlets. Its tastiness and popularity among youngsters also attracts a vast number of children. Secondly, the sedentary lifestyle that many are leading these days might result in rising proportion of obesity among the population. Humanity possesses a plethora of advanced innovations, including buses or cars, which undoubtedly simplify our lives. On the other hand, these vehicles also discourage us from participating in physically-demanding activities such as walking or cycling. Stairs in buildings are used merely for emergencies; otherwise, most visitors prefer elevators. Moreover, various educational institutions unfortunately prioritize academic achievements over health; therefore, students are provided with inadequate fitness activities in the syllabus.
To mitigate the problem of obesity, health campaigners have put forward certain proposals. Firstly, exposures to junk food should be minimized. Relentlessly catching sight of images of fries and burgers can stimulate consumers’ appetite and encourage them to purchase those meals. To avoid this situation, authorities should restrict fast food marketing strategies, ban unhealthy dishes from being featured on television, or control brands’ advertising methods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.95698924731 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21876571339 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.731182795699 0.561755894193 130% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4118067609 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.8 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0732891893766 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0227385304711 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345926720409 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0473864706275 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0098256373642 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.29 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.21 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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